I Tell Ma How It Went
Ma called within five
minutes of my reaching home.
“You’ve reached home, ma?”
she asked.
“Just reached, mom,” I
said.
“How did it go, Miki? Did
you like him?”
“No, Ma, I did not like him.”
“But why not?”
“Isn’t it enough that I
didn’t? I didn’t. Not at all. He was rude and obnoxious and boring.”
“But…”
“Stop bothering me, mom,
okay?”
“I’m sorry, ma,”
she said quietly.
“That was mean,” Mandakini
protested.
“Ma, listen, I didn’t like
him at all. He says he wants someone who can take care of the house, and all
that nonsense. He didn’t listen to what I was saying, he was going on about
himself…”
“Are you sure you’re not
expecting too much, Miki?” Ma asked.
“Wha… what?”
“You don’t find perfect
men in the real world, my love. Don’t keep your expectations so high that no
one can match up to them. Don’t expect to meet one of the heroes of the books
you read.”
“I can’t believe this!” fumed
Miki. “She makes me meet this rude, boorish guy and then she tells me my
expectations are too high!”
“Come on, Ma,” I said
aloud – and less irascibly. “It’s not that…”
Ma interrupted me,
speaking fast as if she wanted to get it out. “Are you sure this has nothing to
do with Raghav, ma?”
“What?” I cried. “What do
you mean?”
“Raghav and you have been
close for a long time…”
“Ma, Raghav’s engaged. He’s
getting married soon.”
“I know, my love. But you…
he is your best friend, isn’t he?”
“What, now she suspects
I’m in love with Raghav?” exclaimed Miki.
“You can’t deny she has
some cause,” said Mandakini.
“Ma, I’m not in love with
Raghav, okay? I’ve never been. It’s not that at all. But Raghav is loads better
than this Kaushik, and I’m sure there are other nice guys out there. I’m not
going to settle for a jerk.”
“But Miki, are you sure
you’re not being hasty? You’ve only met him once…”
“That was more than
enough, Ma. What’s your hurry with getting me married off, anyway? I’m only 24,
it’s not like I’m getting old…”
“I had Damini by the time
I was your age, Miki.” Unlike me, my sister had no qualms about being known by
her given name.
“That was a different
time! It doesn’t mean I have to do the same.”
“And it wasn’t like she
was happy,” whispered Miki.
“I get so worried about
you, Miki. You live all alone, so far away…”
“I’m perfectly fine, Ma,”
I said gently. “I like living alone. I enjoy my independence. You
wouldn’t want me to marry someone I don’t like and be unhappy, would you?”
“Of course not, but…”
“Please, Ma, stop
worrying. And you promised you wouldn’t ask me to do this again if this attempt
didn’t go well…”
“I know, Miki, but…”
“What’s the matter, Ma?
Don’t you trust me to decide for myself?” My throat hurt as I said that.
“Miki, you have always
been smart enough to make your own decisions, and I’ve never forced you into
anything…”
“And I’ve never made a
serious mistake yet, have I?” I asked.
“No, ma. You’re
right, I trust you. I won’t mention this again.”
“Thanks, Ma.”
“Just… just tell me if you
change your mind, won’t you?”
“I won’t change my
mind!” said Miki furiously.
But aloud, I merely said,
“Of course I will.”
14 comments:
that's the tough part- dealing with an anxious, well meaning and not -so-patient parent:(
Dipali: So you identify with the child and not with the parent, do you? That seems to bode well for your children! :P
This is so well written, Unmana. I was almost reading the lines as if they were dialogues in a play.
Priya Mani: Welcome, new commenter! And thank you very much. Most of us say out loud only a small part of what we're feeling even when we're taling to someone we trust, and getting some of those unspoken thoughts across is part of why I find dialogue so challenging and interesting. Of course, I cheat a bit here by using the voices in Miki's head.
Thanks, Alok!
- I so wish I had the complete book :)
- How about putting up 2 chapters every week ;b
Just a few more weeks, Gayatri!
really well put. :) the conversation from miki's side was so relatable.
Unmana, I can't but help feeling a little sorry for Ma. :)
Funny, Blogger ate my own comment.
Thanks, Orange Girl!
Banno, I'm so glad. I was a little disappointed that everyone was sympathizing with Miki and not with her Ma.
This post reminds me of the time my sister was going through proposals and agreed to meet a few guys on mom's insistence.
Mom thought the guys were good and sis was being unreasonable in her rejection.
Those were tough times for her. Luckily, I never had to face this scene :D
Very well written U. Each dialogue between the two characters stands as real.
Waiting for the next chapter :)
Love this! How I wish I could read the entire story at one go!
Why, why does Blogger eat up my own comments?
Sigh. Anyway.
Thanks, momofrs. That tells the people who think I'm being hard on Kaushik! ;-)
Nivedita: Oh, not a lot longer to go, you know.
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